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My submission for the Mythical Creatures Design Challenge!

What you think? :)
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:iconblankeyjohanna:
BlankeyJohanna Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the idea.
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you, I'm glad you like it :)
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:iconnicolehrrsn:
nicolehrrsn Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I love the design on top of the logo. I definitely know some guys who'd like this tee ;)
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you :bow: We'll have to see how this competition ends :)
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:iconbreakaway13:
Breakaway13 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Student General Artist
very nice design, but i agree about the DA logo. I'd consider (if not taking it out) to either try making the DA logo more opaque and possibly a different color so that would make the other design stand out more.
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Hmmm yeah... Or well, If the logo was just slightly shorter (heightwise) it would make the picture alot more dynamic altogether and move the focuspoint upwards aswell making the design stand out more..

Though yeah I agree if the logo was also of different color, Something that goes in harmony with the magenta from the design.. They would balance eachother out!

Thanks alot for your feedback :)
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:iconbreakaway13:
Breakaway13 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Student General Artist
right. that would help, too. and your welcome :) glad to help
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
:)
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:iconsilent-7:
Silent-7 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Student Artist
I agree with blazi76,

The DA logo kinda takes away from the winged eye design.
It doesn't help that they're the same color, which takes away the contrast.
The black background of the shirt would have really made the eye pop out.


checkout my Entry:[link]
(comments/critiques and votes are welcomed)
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
I do agree it could have been slightly different concerning the DAlogo :) I was in a rush to get this submitted before the competition closed so I had to go with what I had without giving it that much extra thought!

I'll check yours out :)
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:iconblazi76:
blazi76 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
interesting concept but I think DA logo is tooo owerwhelming.
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Yeah that might be the case :)

Thanks alot for your feedback!
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:iconmitzvahrose:
MitzvahRose Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Cool! Is that an eye? It's very unique, to say the least. :)
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Hehe, yeah it's like an.... Magical gigantic flying eye that hexes and hurts people and animals at will!
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:iconmitzvahrose:
MitzvahRose Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*Bliks* I must say... you have an interesting imagination, lol
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Hahha x) I guess that's a... Good thing?
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:iconmitzvahrose:
MitzvahRose Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yup! :D XD
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:iconnopeita:
Nopeita Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this design! Well done!
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you, I'm flattered :bow:
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:iconappleandtangerine:
appleandtangerine Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really love the magenta and black combination! XD
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Ha, I'm glad you like it =) Thanks!
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:icon8bpencil:
8Bpencil Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Student General Artist
goood choice in color and design=)
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you :worship: Good to hear you like it!
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:iconlogarithmicspiral:
LOGARITHMICSPIRAL Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the all seeing eye
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Hehhe, why not ;P
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:iconlogarithmicspiral:
LOGARITHMICSPIRAL Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the all seeing eye is evil
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
And wicked ! ;P And mischievous
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:iconlogarithmicspiral:
LOGARITHMICSPIRAL Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
tisk tisk
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SilentVeil Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So neat, what mythical creature is that?

Anyway, my comment ....I love the floating eyeball. It's devilish, but I think you should have changed the color for the deviant art symbol. The eyeball gets lost in the symbol, and the contrast of colors would have made it really pop forward for everyone. Otherwise, it's fantastic.
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Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Yeah I think the logo could have been made darker, smaller, or just left out of it altogether.. Dunno :) It can fiddle with the dynamics a bit!

Anyways, it's a beholder! EVIL!!!

Thank you for your feedback :bow: :)
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:iconsilentveil:
SilentVeil Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, thank you. I really wanted to know that one.
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
:) Heh, don't mention it
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:iconasha-anne:
Asha-Anne Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Awesome design!
Although i don't think it so much needs to big DA background bit, i think it could carry itself pretty damn well without it :)
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Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Yeah, I think you might be right about the background :) Could have left it out aswell!

Thanks alot for taking time to give me feedback :bow: :w00t:
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:iconasha-anne:
Asha-Anne Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No problem ^^
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:iconmintdesu:
mintdesu Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
adorable :D I love the colors! :) the colors match nicely XD
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you :bow: :) I'm real happy to hear you like it! :w00t:
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:iconmintdesu:
mintdesu Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
you're welcome c:
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:iconsquaredrabbit:
SquaredRabbit Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Student Filmographer
looks pretty sweet! I like how happy the eyeball looks xD good job!
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Hahaa, it does look quite happy now that you mentioned it xD Thanks alot for leaving me feedback and for having the work in your favourites!
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ThatJuanArtist Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Excelent eye monster design, it does feel too foreign to the DA logo however, maybe blending them in together somehow might help with that. Great design ocerall though :)
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Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
I know what you mean, maybe if they had the same transparency (the logo is the same color but it has 50% transparency) they would sit more together ! :) There's also few other options that could make the design more consistent

Thank you for your feedback :worship:
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ThatJuanArtist Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem, glad I could be of help :)
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:iconcrystalstar1001:
Crystalstar1001 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very detailed, interesting. It clashes with the dA logo a bit, but otherwise very well done :)
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks alot :) :) I can see what you mean, but I'm glad you find it interesting nevertheless :bow:
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:iconcrystalstar1001:
Crystalstar1001 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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:icongordonjugah:
gordonjugah Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Student General Artist
Very stylish! Although I don't feel like it mixed well with the dA logo well. Still, awesome job on the design!
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks alot! :) I think if I had more time (just made it for the competition before it closed), I would have made few things differently here.. Concerning the DAlogo and the overall composition aswell :) So yeah I hear you!

:bow:
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:iconfirewario:
FireWario Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Cool! Love the center design a lot!
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:iconichariot:
Ichariot Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you :bow: I'm glad to hear you like it! And thanks alot for having the work in your favourites by the way :)
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