very nice design, but i agree about the DA logo. I'd consider (if not taking it out) to either try making the DA logo more opaque and possibly a different color so that would make the other design stand out more.
Hmmm yeah... Or well, If the logo was just slightly shorter (heightwise) it would make the picture alot more dynamic altogether and move the focuspoint upwards aswell making the design stand out more..
Though yeah I agree if the logo was also of different color, Something that goes in harmony with the magenta from the design.. They would balance eachother out!
The DA logo kinda takes away from the winged eye design. It doesn't help that they're the same color, which takes away the contrast. The black background of the shirt would have really made the eye pop out.
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I do agree it could have been slightly different concerning the DAlogo I was in a rush to get this submitted before the competition closed so I had to go with what I had without giving it that much extra thought!